Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Looking at My Notes



Hi Friends.

Well, the notes and words I wrote in the mountains have given me some good ideas for poems. I also have spent some time over the last week transcribing the ideas I recorded while I was driving. So, now that I have all of this information I guess I need to get down to some heavy writing.


This morning I was playing with some Sedoka I started in the mountains. Remember, the poem with the 5-7-7 5-7-7 syllable count? They are fun to write, and they keep the words at a minimum, and the pictures sharp. It’s a good way to getting back to writing if you’ve been away for awhile.


While doing that I have thought a lot about this blog, and what I might do to change it for the better. If you have any ideas, please let me know. If something’s not working I need to get rid of it. I’ve been thinking about doing an audio file of each poem I have here, and having that available when you visit, so you can hear the poem as you read it. Might work, so I’ll see what I can do.


I’m working on a new book of poems, and since the first book is out of print I’m thinking about doing an audio book with those poems and stories. I’m keeping busy. I hope you are writing also. I’ll see you the next time.


Coyote


Shifty eyed rascal
Looking over your shoulder
Your reputation follows


Keeps getting closer
I hear you crying at night
Lamenting your shameful life


Storm


Aspen leaves turn up
Elk move to sheltered valley
Wind screams through high pine branches


The storm closes in
A wolf pounding at the door
I dream of you beside me


2 comments:

  1. Robert your last poem brings back memories of a time my husband and I were in the west in late October and the Aspen trees were so golden in the sun they took my breath away.
    I love the images you present here. You have some great ideas on taking your blog up a notch. But I just enjoy reading your poetry.

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  2. Hi, Robert. It was nice to meet you during your recent visit to Lexington, KY. I have called attention to your blog here:

    http://teachgoodwriting.blogspot.com/2012/03/robert-w-kimsey-georgia-poet.html

    I hope that you will take up the blog again. It can serve THE CAUSE.

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